tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7436812892124383603.post5712013594985992829..comments2024-03-03T22:02:43.757-04:00Comments on Quiet Laughter: Sweet Saturday Sample (Feb 4)Guilie Castillohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09006999087139126972noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7436812892124383603.post-81947031803866025892012-02-06T17:27:43.818-04:002012-02-06T17:27:43.818-04:00This is a great sample, and we get a little bit of...This is a great sample, and we get a little bit of everything in it--lots of the setting, but I can tell so much about the characters just from this little interaction, even though I've seen nothing else of this work. Beautiful job! And I appreciate the inclusion of Eliot. "The Hollow Men" and "The Waste Land" and "Ash-Wednesday" are my favorites.Kristin Laughtinhttp://kristinlaughtin.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7436812892124383603.post-89035422577057706852012-02-05T16:30:01.955-04:002012-02-05T16:30:01.955-04:00Interesting sample of him trying to force Elliot o...Interesting sample of him trying to force Elliot on her.Lindsayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07716003019499843582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7436812892124383603.post-54063492916662164052012-02-05T00:28:42.009-04:002012-02-05T00:28:42.009-04:00Very nice sample. The way you set the tone of this...Very nice sample. The way you set the tone of this scene was fabulous.Lizhttp://blog.lizbotts.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7436812892124383603.post-19338511309469337882012-02-04T22:49:09.520-04:002012-02-04T22:49:09.520-04:00I loved the characters and the setting you created...I loved the characters and the setting you created.Carrie-Annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05810154378449825641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7436812892124383603.post-2978607819974830502012-02-04T14:55:21.059-04:002012-02-04T14:55:21.059-04:00Beautiful scene. I like the way you took the chara...Beautiful scene. I like the way you took the characters into a quiet alleyway, overhanging with bougainvilla, for the recitation of the poem. Lovely and dramatic.Sandy Nachlingerhttp://iousex.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7436812892124383603.post-11748730241894845672012-02-04T13:49:14.143-04:002012-02-04T13:49:14.143-04:00Er, I guess I need to read the poet too. Super ex...Er, I guess I need to read the poet too. Super excerpt.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7436812892124383603.post-24295332230499987002012-02-04T12:44:28.384-04:002012-02-04T12:44:28.384-04:00Nice sample!!! He is persistent, isn't he, lo...Nice sample!!! He is persistent, isn't he, lol!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7436812892124383603.post-76773326437190996892012-02-04T12:43:20.081-04:002012-02-04T12:43:20.081-04:00Wow. This is a-MAZE-ing!Really fantastic job of dr...Wow. This is a-MAZE-ing!Really fantastic job of drawing the reader into this time and place to experience these moments with the characters!Sarah Ballancehttp://sarahballance.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7436812892124383603.post-78523926147211593612012-02-04T12:09:59.769-04:002012-02-04T12:09:59.769-04:00I do love Elliot's poems. I totally agree with...I do love Elliot's poems. I totally agree with Michael for having to introduce Alexia to him.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12106399041059595196noreply@blogger.com