Sunday, November 6, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday (November 6)



First Six Sentence Sunday of November!  In spite of NaNo (I'm at around 10K there--yay!) I managed to remember to enter the link on time, unlike last week.  


Thank you for visiting Quiet Laughter, and I hope you enjoy this very brief excerpt from Chapter 7 of my WIP, Restoring Experience.  


This excerpt is a continuation of the scene I posted last week (click here if you missed it).

“I know, it’s dumb,” he laughed, “but I know I will.  Alexia, can I ask you something?”
“I don’t know, Michael.  Is it going to make me uncomfortable?”
“Probably.  If you didn’t have a boyfriend, would that change anything?”

Thanks again for your visit!  If you enjoyed this or if you have any ideas on how this could be improved, please leave a comment.  All feedback is most welcome, and I love hearing from you.

Remember to visit the other Six Sunday-ers--some awesome talent there, and a great way to discover follow-worthy bloggers.

Happy Sunday reading!

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15 comments :

  1. UnknownNovember 6, 2011 at 9:38 AM

    An excerpt that makes you want to read on. And well done on NaNo!!! xoxo

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  2. Lydia SharpNovember 6, 2011 at 11:18 AM

    I love this exchange:

    Is it going to make me uncomfortable?

    Probably.

    Very well done.

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  3. christine warnerNovember 6, 2011 at 11:36 AM

    aaahhh....I want to hear her answer!

    Great ending hook and nice six :)

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  4. JulieDestryNovember 6, 2011 at 11:37 AM

    i agree--great hook. good luck with NaNo!

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  5. AnonymousNovember 6, 2011 at 2:55 PM

    Hello, Guilie! I love the six! I hope you're having a great Sunday!

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  6. Guilie CastilloNovember 6, 2011 at 4:44 PM

    Thanks for stopping by, gals! Glad you enjoyed these very brief six. I promise to start next week right where this one left off :) And now I'm off to visit your blogs!

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  7. AnonymousNovember 6, 2011 at 5:52 PM

    I like it. Makes me want to keep reading.

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  8. J.C. MartinNovember 6, 2011 at 6:27 PM

    Oh no, not that awkward question! Nice natural dialogue here, good work!

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  9. Lex ValentineNovember 6, 2011 at 6:30 PM

    She's definitely comfortable with him questions or no!

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  10. Denny S. BryceNovember 6, 2011 at 6:32 PM

    had to stop by and check your six out - really good - great intro and makes me want to see what's next.

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  11. Daezarkian13November 6, 2011 at 8:33 PM

    Wonderful dialog! =D

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  12. Zee MonodeeNovember 7, 2011 at 12:45 AM

    Oooh, the guts of that question! I wonder what she answers. Not fair to keep us dangling, girl. :)

    Awesome on the Nano progress, & great six. XOXO

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  13. Guilie CastilloNovember 7, 2011 at 10:12 AM

    Thanks, everyone, for the visit! I'm glad you liked these six, and I hope you'll be back next week for Alexia's answer :)

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  14. Talli RolandNovember 8, 2011 at 1:40 PM

    Fantastic six sentences - I want more! :)

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  15. J.M. BlackmanNovember 8, 2011 at 10:35 PM

    I love the "slice of life" feel to this (and last week's) six. I look forward to Alexia's answer! Good way to hook a reader. :)

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